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And as you might of heard
She went without a trace.
Her lips never saying a word,
Her eyes never filling up
with tears.
And I'm still breathing
Still not crying.

And I'm locked up in violence,
As its chains constrict,
tighten and tauten,
she wasn't thinking  .

Take another chance,
look in ,look out.
Dreaming in your head,
Of a kiss. Oh like the wind
Its so cold
Why don't you just wake up now.

My lips mouth " I love you "
through a broken window
And oh how I slept
With you in mind.

And I'm locked tightly,
Didn't breathe for a second
And now?.....
She now laying on the floor,
Arms bent, legs torn.
Hair mangled ,eyes tight shut.
Just one kiss--

I broke free from these shackles.
And burnt my fingers on the ash.
And as you might of heard
I went without a trace.
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I feel like I'm trapped.
todays been a bad day.


This was an idea I had a while ago but never got down to writing it


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i like this, its really well written well done

sorry ur days been so shitty.

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LESBIAN/GAY PRIDE! :love:

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Bored As FUCK? [link] <--- go to it and entertain yourself :D (warning small side effects are - hang-overs and addictions.)
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what made your day bad?

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Love is stupid and pointless. I live alone&I will die alone. It's etched in my blood&I am prone to this path. Love doesn't exsist for someone like me. So I can only wait until I lay alone six feet under for all of this pain to fianlly go away.
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My lips mouth " I love you "
through a broken window
And oh how I slept
With you in mind.

I love this bit, it's so sad :( xXx

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GiVe. Me. A. rEaSoN. tO. bElIeVe.

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:iconbutterfly-ona-wheel:
yer its my fave bit to :hug:

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use a smile like noun and Ill think like a verb.


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