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I just hold on for my wish;
A fatal blow to my heart.
To make it beat 10 times faster once again.

Inhale.Exhale. Is it worth it?

When the world gets me down;
I hunger for someone, to hold me.
The way he does.

Could it make me feel happier?

And I imagine the kiss.
Laying under a tree;
So warm.Safe. Smiling.

Like our past darling; Do you remember?

Is there anyone....
Anyone at all?
Once glance that's all I need.

I will take this.

One kiss.
Stay with me forever.
love me.want me. God, hold me

Am I putting you off?

Before I cut out my heart.
Saviour the last beat.
Its in invisible hands.

I just got to live for today- And hold on to my memories of what you said.
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I am a hopeless romantic.
I will always hold out for love.
Though every day it is doubtful;
I will ever tell anyone three little words again.

I'm a creep
I'm a werido.
What the hell am I doing here?
I don't belong...

Creep- Radiohead

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:iconbeast57:
Another very good one I like it! FAV!

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Please repeat the message. It's the music we choose! Keep a mild groove on B-) -Gorillaz-

Please Vist :gallery: [link] give me a critique! It will be appreciated!
:icontsutsuku-chan:
wow.... :hug:

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Proud member of the ~JigglyLoversClub

"'Don't leave me alone!'
The cry in the night
Of anguish heart-striking
Of soul-killing fright...
Don't leave me alone!'
A world heard that cry"

-Dragonsinger
:iconinvisigoth100:
I love it's abstract-ness... wonderful!
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:iconclaudiacasanova:
Wonderfully descriptive! I absolutely love it! I am tempted to add I can relate to this piece and I am shocked at how well you you placed the emotions to the forfront of the poem. Amazing work!

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To be or not to be?

meh, lets just eat some pancakes and call it a day.

Clubs: *RawEm0tion ~PoeticPeace ~PoeticPath ~da-library ~Writers-Guild-DA *degrees-of-love *WordCount *LiteraryUnderground
:iconbutterfly-ona-wheel:
thank you very much :)

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use a smile like noun and Ill think like a verb.


links:love:
Myspace
:iconfalling-failure:
From one hopeless romantic to another, this writting is wonderful! I very much like the way you've structured the stanzas, creative. I sign of a truely good writer. fav!

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"And I'll love you forever if I'll ever love at all." The Gaslight Anthem
:iconbutterfly-ona-wheel:
aww thank you very much :]

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use a smile like noun and Ill think like a verb.


links:love:
Myspace
:iconclaudiacasanova:
Your welcome :heart:

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To be or not to be?

meh, lets just eat some pancakes and call it a day.

Clubs: *RawEm0tion ~PoeticPeace ~PoeticPath ~da-library ~Writers-Guild-DA *degrees-of-love *WordCount *LiteraryUnderground

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